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In class we are learning about narratives and making good and exciting ideas. We did a sheet called sizzling starts and this is my favorite one;

The chalk was moving across the huge black polished white board but there was no teacher holding the chalk. I was trembling in fear and screamed “What is the chalk doing its moving by its self!” The children just laughed and kept on playing their clapping games and screaming out horrible tunes like ba ba black sheep. I thought if they could not hear me I could be the teacher’s pet in class. BOOM! The door slammed open and the teacher was slamming her high heel shoes as she walked. She yelled at me and ignored the rest of the children. I question myself. Am I dreaming? Or am I the lone and only target of my teachers life for life?

Question Time

What do you think?


I am describing someone in classroom, hopefully at the end of it you can guess who it is.

This person has blond hair with a bit of a brown tan to it. They have many freckles and they have small feet. They usually wear running shoes and skorts. They have fair skin and have green eyes that are quite like dark green. They have chocolate brown eyebrows that show out on her pretty face.

This person adores bamboo and loves sport. They are funny and can be a trouble and utterly cheeky. They are enthusiastic. They love chocolate and when they eats it most of it doesn’t get eaten it goes all over her face and mouth and then gets wiped off with their hands.

They are awesome at sports and fast at running. They love the outside and if they get dirty they don’t care. (There’re is really weird). I would say she is smart but not the best. They are are kind and cheers people up when they are sad. I think they are good at maths and P.E. Sometimes she can be sneaky in a funny way. (It’s a girl).

She has a sporty personality and good at bamboo. Who is she? I hope you can guess!

By Dana.C

Question time:

Who am I?

How to do…

This is what I think quality commenting is:

  • Use a nice greeting.
  • Make it look like a letter.
  • make sure you are using the correct spelling and punctuation.
  • Give a compliment and maybe ask a question.
  • Talk about the right topic.
  • Don’t give away personal information.
  • Make sure you edit any mistakes at the end.

Question time:

Have you had someone write a quality comment on your blog?

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Today is Anzac day when we remember all the soldiers that fought in war. I hope every soldier that is still serving in the armed forces realises how important they are to our country. My great uncle served in World War II.

Question Time

Do you know anyone who has fought in a war?

If so, have you seen their medals?